Wednesday, February 2, 2011

this is your life!!

This is my life


In my family I have two sisters their names are Misty and Holly (Holly and me are twins, not identical we look totally different).  I also have one brother his name is PIM.

My parents’ names are Carl and Jenny. My dad Carl has nine brothers and sisters; he is the youngest boy in his family. He is the closest to his youngest sister Anna. They use to play, and make fun of each other and they were just really close. My mom has about four or five brothers, and sister’s and they were all really close.   

If could be on the show this is my live I would bring my Aunt Anna (she is my dad’s sister) her daughter (Katelyn), my sister’s boys (Mitchell and Corbon), and my brother (PIM).

I would bring my Aunt Anna because she was my third grade teacher, and we use to live right across the street from her for like three or four years. She also has a daughter that is in the same grade as me and my sister. I would bring her on the show too because in second grade me, Holly and, Katelyn would do everything together so our teacher would always called us the three musketeers.
               
I would also bring Mitchell and Corbin. Because Mitchell is eleven months younger than me, and we would always did fun stuff together. We both like the same thing, and we like to tease people, and get them mad at us. Corbon is about a year, or two younger than me we do crazy stuff together and when me, Corbin, Holly, and Mitchell get together it is so much fun we always come up with something to do that bug our parents.

I would take my brother PIM, too. He has always been my hero. I always look up to him. We always have a good time together. He is always telling me to never give up on my dreams, and stay in school and get good grades.

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Free throw

I’m going up for a shot then this big tall girl comes and, slaps my hand. She knocks the ball away from me. “BUZZ!” I hear the little cork ball inside the whistle bouncing around. I hear the referee call the foul in the big tall girl. She gets really mad and stomps off the court and sits down. I look up quickly at the scour board. I need to make this free throw to win this game. I line up on the free throw line take a step back. Take a deep breath, I hear the crowed yelling and, screaming at me, but I tune them out.
                I concentrate on the rim really hard. I get the ball dribble it a couple times; I bring it up by my chest look at the rim one last time. I bring my arms past my head as far up as they can go. At the same time as I bring up my arms up, I go on my tippy toes. Then I flick my wrist, and when all of this is happening I do not take my eyes off the rim. I watch the ball go through the air in to the hoop. Then hear the ball swoosh against the net. Then the crowed goes wild, and starts screaming. My team members start jumping and screaming.
                My team members that are on the court give me high fives and tell me good job. We get back on defense; I saw that they were going to throw the ball to number 11. So I hurried and run to her right as soon as they threw the ball to her. I stole the ball from her. I turned around and looked at the rim and shoot the ball. I watched the ball go through the air. I looked away and I hear the ball rub against the net.        

Monday, October 4, 2010

new ending to stuck in neutral


Crackle…..crackle…..crackle   I felt a seizure coming and I dream of me going on this date with Ally. We went on a boat ride, we went under this tunnel and on the other side was this bay. We stopped and had dinner. We had mashed potatoes and chicken. When we were eating she was talking about the time she ate chicken and it did not taste good, but I could not concentrate on her, because I was thinking. Will my dad  kill me? Am I already in heaven? Will I ever come out of my seizure?
Then I feel something cold and stiff on my face. I thought I was going to die right there but then, I wake up I see my dad crying and saying, “I love you son!” Then my mom came in and saw my dad crying. My mom said in an angry voice, “What did you do to him?” Then my dad said, “Nothing I love him too much, I am not going to kill him.”    

Thursday, September 16, 2010


The Curse Of The Stoves!

Hi my name is BrinLee but, you can call me Brin. I’m nine years old I have long blond hair and I have blue eyes. I have one brother his name is Mitchell. He has dark brown hair and brown eyes he is fourteen. He is a really good brother he watches me after school because our mom works full time at a hotel as a maid. My moms name is kourtney she has brown hair and big blue eyes. My dad was killed in a car accident. The day I was born, he was on the mountain for the deer hunt. As soon as he heard my mom was in labor he backed up his things and he come off the mountain. To get off the mountain he had to take this long dirt road and he hit a rock a big rock and rolled off the mountain. His name is Corbin. We live in a little town called Castle Dale it is by the mountains and by the desert so we can go camping and fishing and go to the desert all in the same day.
Oh…. I’m going to tell you a story that you will never believe it is so freaky. Ok so I think it was last year about September 15th, mom was working as usual. me and Mitchell were in the kitchen talking and making a pizza for dinner. Then all of a sudden the stove came to life and said, “I’m going to bake you and eat you.” He started to laugh this really creepy loud laugh. The stove started to spit fire at us and, the stoves keep missing and now our house is on fire. I started to scream as loud as I could. Mitchell called the fire department. When the stove heard the fire truck it stopped spitting fire and went back to being a normal stove and just sitting there froze. Then the fire department broke in to our house and asked “Where’s the fire?” we told them about the stove but they did not believe us and they said if we call them again and there is not a fire we would go to kids jail. After they left we went to bed and about an hour later our mom came in and kissed us and told us good night.
 The next day at school I was sitting at my desk right before lunch. We he this horrible scream coming from the lunch room, it sounded like she was dying or something like that. We all run in the lunch room to see what happened, I thought the lunch lady saw a rat. But I was totally wrong she was getting cooked by the oven that was in the center of the lunch room. Her face was shoved in last so when the oven shut, her face was facing us and we could hear her screaming and then she disinterred in to the oven. Then the stove started to creak and the moan and then it burst in to flames and started to laugh in a deep, evil, , loud laugh and it scared all of us kids and we ran in to our class room and locked the door. We heard the stove deep loud, evil, laugh and then all of a sudden “AHHHH” it was our teacher screaming! It was a high pitch voice that cracked my friend’s glasses.

All of a sudden it went quiet, so quiet that you could hear nothing but the bounding of your heart. Then the stove came bursting through the door. The slivers of the door came and hit us and we were in the back of the room, we went to the farthest we could get from the door. The stove started to come at us it was on fire now. All the desks were on fire and the floor the stove came so close to us that I could feel the fire burning me. Then our teacher ran in to her class room and called nine one one. Once the stove heard her talk on the phone it ran in to the kitchen and every thing was back to normal the desks were not burnt the door was back together and, the kitchen was perfectly back together nothing was out of order. Sadly the lunch lady was gone she dispersed no finger prints no trace of here.  When the fire department got to my school they asked us where the fire is and we explained how the lunch lady died and how the stove came to life but they did not believe us. They told my teacher that if she called the fire department again, when there is no fire that she would go to jail. When we went back to class we all just sat there and did nothing we were to shocked to do anything.

When the bell rang to go home I ran as fast as I could. When I got home Mitchell was already there waiting for me. I told him all about what happened at school. Mitchell said I was in 4th hour.      We were cooking then we all heard this moaning sound and then all of a sudden the stove burst in to flames. Then it started to laugh in a deep, loud and evil sounding. It started to walk towards us and I take off running down the hall. I look back to see if it was following  me it was, know the school is on fire because of  the stove.  When I finally reach the office to call the fire department once it heard me call the stove took off towards the classroom. Then the fire went away and the walls were not burnet and the smell of something burning was gone.  When the fire department came and, seen that there was no fire. The main chef said, “If you were ever to call us when there is no fire that I would go to jail.”
Then it was silent. I did not want to talk about it any more. So I turned on the movie, the little mermaid. That movie always calms me down. Mitchell left he room because he hates that movie I was freaking out so I had to watch it.
“I’m home” mom says” how was school?” we told her about what happened, and about the lunch lady getting eating by the stove and how no one would believe them.  Then she said, “o all you have to do is flip this switch and it becomes nice again. “Ok thanks good night.” I said to my mom.
I was excited to go to school today so I could tell everyone that I know how to fix the oven and so I told my teacher and she tried it and it worked and know every thing is back to normal. When I came home Mitchell was home and he said, “that it did not work and it happened again and my class can not   a way to fix it we tried every thing. But it will not work so we through it away so now the school has to by us a new stove.